Everyday it gets harder.
Everyday it's like a nightmare
progressing on.
Everyday is another prayer
echoing from my bones
asking god
to take me now.
Everyday I close up more.
Everyday it gets more impossible.
Everyday I feel myself die some more.
Everyday I lay on my bed
wondering how
I'll leave this hell.
I've never felt so much pain
Everyday...
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Re: Everyday...
it can sure seem like that sometimes, never give up tho....... great emotion in this piece.
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My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?
---Todd Agnew
Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword
---Gordy
My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?
---Todd Agnew
Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword
---Gordy
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heinzs
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Re: Everyday...
Welcome back, and Happy Belated Birthday 
An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed Be.
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nekot
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Re: Everyday...
What gordy said...
'Great emotion in this piece" describing the dark night (day) of the soul (and body).
I feel the poem is expressing emotional and physical pain.
'Great emotion in this piece" describing the dark night (day) of the soul (and body).
I feel the poem is expressing emotional and physical pain.
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