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Post by soloIQ » Mon Feb 27, 2012 4:32 pm

Hello waterdrop
on the roam
must be searching
for your home

Move out waterdrop
through a pipe
down the drain
safe from wipe

Press on waterdrop
heats no fun
Don't get left
in the sun

Brave little waterdrop
Lost some weight
almost there
past that gate

Goodbye waterdrop
found the sea
slip on in
cease to be.

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Re: Waterdrop

Post by Debbie » Tue Mar 06, 2012 10:04 am

Hi soloIQ...this is a little gem of a poem..a thought that rolled on through your mind as you probably saw a water drop.
I imagining it as it finally found the sea...awesome..keep them poems coming... :thewave: :bow: :angel:

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Re: Waterdrop

Post by DarleneG » Sat Jul 28, 2012 6:14 am

Yes! I agree with Debbie, keep those wonderfully sensitive poems coming. Anybody that can identify with the plight of a single waterdrop is my type of person. And I believe the poem is deeper than that. When it joins the sea and ceases to be, like all of us, after death, we are greater than we once were because we are with our Master. :thumbsup:
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