Immolate, by Mightfall

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Immolate, by Mightfall

Post by heinzs » Sat Aug 18, 2018 9:55 pm

Immolate

When I finally depart, journeying to the void
Don’t just leave me for the worms in the ground
No, build me a dry, dry pyre to the clouds
And stand on the precipice with slightest tears
Scattering my ashes in the wind with a song
Across the world where I never belonged

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Re: Immolate, by Mightfall

Post by nekot » Fri Aug 24, 2018 6:56 pm

Love this...
the imagery
the substance...

Question: Is Mightfall okay? ...since heinzs posted this and not Mightfall.
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Re: Immolate, by Mightfall

Post by heinzs » Sat Aug 25, 2018 11:54 pm

He wasn't able to post here but gave me this via chat msg on Facebook. He's doing well and posting great pictures of his dogs.
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Re: Immolate, by Mightfall

Post by nekot » Sat Sep 01, 2018 2:32 am

Thanks heinzs!
Great to hear.
I'll drop him an email soon.
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