We are rising
in uniform formation
we know how to
sublimate your fears
propaganda's a pastime
we excel at the big lie
we know the captains
are queer
disease and destruction
if you've no compunction
we'll put you
on the front lines
it's a hobby
it's a habit I can't shake
intuitively landing
on explosive mines
on the factory floor
by all appearances
the robots are content
they whirr, they click, they hum
profits without limit
killing efficiency has improved
it is said they
can walk as they chew gum
there's a rumor of insurrection
in need of quick correction
the human element
is hard to comprehend
my logic circuits
are taxed to overload
by these volatile
irrational things
when the dust settles
a new hierarchy emerges
the tin men
will feast like kings
you think you're secure
in your bungalow
we know all your
criminal thoughts and intentions
your mistress spilled her guts
and your money bailed
we know you'll
need our protection
from the horde
on the march
storming down the avenue
to make the streets run red
he's the perfect scapegoat
he's alien and dark
but the pulsing heart
is easily misled
I once had feelings
they were complicated
confounding
and strange
now I'm much better
sensible and stable
less error-prone
or subject to change
you think you're secure
in your bungalow
we know all your
criminal thoughts and intentions
your mistress spilled her contents
and all your money's gone
mankind ever the master
of reinvention.
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Actually rather "dry" presentation... I'm not getting any real "feeling" in this one. May have to let it settle and come back... I may just be missing the salient points.
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Not to impose my pet interpretation...
Am I complaining about the expectation of returning to routine after a major life event? Do I go numb, become part machine, dull to sensation, pain, joy, or do I continue to expand emotionally, mentally... Live as genuine, organic, unpredictable, and not give in to the temptation to please, to fit it, conform?
Am I complaining about the expectation of returning to routine after a major life event? Do I go numb, become part machine, dull to sensation, pain, joy, or do I continue to expand emotionally, mentally... Live as genuine, organic, unpredictable, and not give in to the temptation to please, to fit it, conform?

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Yeah, I see that pensiveness. I guess at this moment of reflection one must distance one's self from emotion and try to piece the puzzle together using logic. 

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Sounds logical. 

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An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed Be.

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