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Nice to meet you

Post by soular » Fri Nov 17, 2017 8:39 pm

Inexplicably amazed
by the search of own roots

Big Bang?
Then what's before?

The beginning of beginning
The end of end

Is to face infinity
to face yourself
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Post by heinzs » Fri Nov 17, 2017 10:30 pm

In facing ourselves we must each face our mortality. That's not easy to do.

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Post by soular » Sun Nov 19, 2017 6:49 am

Thanks much, Heinz. I changed the last bit.
Sometimes I wonder limits are for realizing the opposite. :hello:
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Post by heinzs » Sun Nov 19, 2017 5:14 pm

I like this version better :thumbsup:
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