Sand Trap

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audiofool
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Sand Trap

Post by audiofool » Sun May 10, 2015 11:34 pm

We've come with
unfortunate news
you'll have to change
your unorthodox views

you've frightened
every young mother
no more secrets
left to discover

a bottle of
prescription pills
is that all it takes
these days
baby's plucked
some daffodils
in this sand trap
sanity decays

we've come to
a joint conclusion
to avoid any
chance of confusion

this is where you
walk out the door
fresh country air
bleeds from every pore

high rise
low expectations
swim the bottom
savor the sensation

inverted hours
blending the dust
trade desire for
a mountain of rust

all I need
is far and gone
yesterday and fair
sweet sings
the maiden song
(and you know)
I'm already there.

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Re: Sand Trap

Post by heinzs » Fri May 15, 2015 8:30 pm

:thumbsup:
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Re: Sand Trap

Post by audiofool » Tue May 19, 2015 4:21 pm

Thanks, heinzs.

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