By the fireside

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burdick
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By the fireside

Post by burdick » Sun May 13, 2012 3:28 am

A vase of heliotrope
Sits mysterious and dark,
Wrapped in its’ fragrance.
Silent, still, solitaire
Hidden on a table
Frozen in time and space
A presence in my life
And
Captures my quiet soul.

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Re: By the fireside

Post by heinzs » Sun Aug 12, 2012 9:39 am

A poetic "still life" portrait, without fruit and flowers.

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