A Spontaneus Praise
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Love poems and poems of romantic interest (not erotica).
Autoprune 12 months.
Love poems and poems of romantic interest (not erotica).
Autoprune 12 months.
- nrip4life
- prophet poet
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Re: A Spontaneus Praise
i still love still in love though its the wrong time....illl never let go until i have a door thats not not worth closing.......i dont think that will ever happen....im srryyy...lets spin....
Old too soon, smart too late....-anonymous
Re: A Spontaneus Praise
Still a beautiful write... so expressive... very nice! It deserves to be read over and over again...
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- Clearwater Poet
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Re: A Spontaneus Praise
I STATE THAT YOU ARE GREAT
My love for you I reveal
I know not how you feel
With kindness if you deal
My mind it will heal
In case you reject
My mind it will deject
My love I project
I will cry if you object
I love your memorable presence
Your affection is my defense
You give jobs to my pens
Because of you peace happens
I totally trust your heart
My soul It can only comfort
To it I often hopefully resort
Will you give me a part?
Will you please reciprocate?
Will you open your heart-gate?
Will your love for me you state?
Will you change my ill-fate?
Your face has divine grace
You belong to Angels' race
You give me memorable days
Please consider my case
My love for you is pure
About this I am damn sure
Only you can give me cure
For you anything I will endure
Please convey without delay
For both of us I deeply pray
With me if you decide to stay
All troubles will go away
Now I very hopefully apply
I am awaiting your reply
Towards you I will fly
If your love you imply
In my favor please decide
And come kindly to my side
In my heart you reside
Perfect bliss, I will provide.
M V VENKATARAMAN
mv.venkataraman@gmail.com
My love for you I reveal
I know not how you feel
With kindness if you deal
My mind it will heal
In case you reject
My mind it will deject
My love I project
I will cry if you object
I love your memorable presence
Your affection is my defense
You give jobs to my pens
Because of you peace happens
I totally trust your heart
My soul It can only comfort
To it I often hopefully resort
Will you give me a part?
Will you please reciprocate?
Will you open your heart-gate?
Will your love for me you state?
Will you change my ill-fate?
Your face has divine grace
You belong to Angels' race
You give me memorable days
Please consider my case
My love for you is pure
About this I am damn sure
Only you can give me cure
For you anything I will endure
Please convey without delay
For both of us I deeply pray
With me if you decide to stay
All troubles will go away
Now I very hopefully apply
I am awaiting your reply
Towards you I will fly
If your love you imply
In my favor please decide
And come kindly to my side
In my heart you reside
Perfect bliss, I will provide.
M V VENKATARAMAN
mv.venkataraman@gmail.com
- Moushka
- Blue Sea Poet
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Re: A Spontaneus Praise
I think i needed this write tonight..........just imagining a man could love me so much and unselfishly like that........but darnit...... i have faults that i don't want to control........
Stuck on Number 2. Learning to begin.
1.Believe 2.Belong 3.Become
1.Awareness 2.Acceptance 3.Action
1.Believe 2.Belong 3.Become
1.Awareness 2.Acceptance 3.Action
- Jess Schue
- Clearwater Poet
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Re: A Spontaneus Praise
Andy, its because you've written things like this that i can't imagine a love more selfless and true than what we have been blessed to experience...although there has been so much pain and separation to endure I am so glad you are in my life and even happier that i am able to read this on days when i feel lost, and your love brings me to the surface...Thank-you so much for showing me that this kind of love is not just in the notebook and such lol, even if you are my Noah :)..I'm so glad this was bumped and acknowledged for its sheer perfection and beauty Hope to see you soon <3 Jess
oh, and p.s. DITTO..spinning sounds just fine..
oh, and p.s. DITTO..spinning sounds just fine..
-Live simply, so others can simply live-Keller Williams
--Breathe, breathe in the air,
Don't be afraid to care.-- Pink Floyd
Dont wana be anything where i dont know when to stop-Trey Anastasio
<3Oh my lover for the first time in my life
my mind can feel...everything is clear in my heart
everything is clear in our world
i feel life, oh i feel love-John Lennon
Let there be songs, to fill the air-Hunter/Garcia
This Love has got No ceiling-Eddie Vedder
--Breathe, breathe in the air,
Don't be afraid to care.-- Pink Floyd
Dont wana be anything where i dont know when to stop-Trey Anastasio
<3Oh my lover for the first time in my life
my mind can feel...everything is clear in my heart
everything is clear in our world
i feel life, oh i feel love-John Lennon
Let there be songs, to fill the air-Hunter/Garcia
This Love has got No ceiling-Eddie Vedder
- nrip4life
- prophet poet
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Re: A Spontaneus Praise
i wrote this in a priceless time...thank you jess...
Old too soon, smart too late....-anonymous
- Moushka
- Blue Sea Poet
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Re: A Spontaneus Praise
Every person no matter who or what has a unique personality.............I can't wait to meet virginia is a song on the radio that i listen to..........sorry if i confused you............nrip4life wrote:moushka- ?????
Stuck on Number 2. Learning to begin.
1.Believe 2.Belong 3.Become
1.Awareness 2.Acceptance 3.Action
1.Believe 2.Belong 3.Become
1.Awareness 2.Acceptance 3.Action
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