Doctor it hurts so down there
They’re hanging down, you know where
No I don’t want to show you
Just gimme some of that goo
Yes there’s blood when I go
I want it stopped, make it so
It’s nothing sinister is it?
Cos it’s only red stuff mixed with my shit?
pb72 (Some days are better then others!)
Oh it’s not much.
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Re: Oh it’s not much.
scary images, but it made me smile!..
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Too bad it isn't funny... I don't think people will ever learn.
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Re: Oh it’s not much.
now i feel really bad because my response was so light-hearted...and of course if this is about a true incident, then i wholeheartedly agree with heinzs that it certainly is NOT funny..i was assuming that it was meant to be amusing since it was posted in the Funny forum..i truly do apologise and i hope that there are no hard feelings..
Re: Oh it’s not much.
Hi thanks for your responses
I wrote it because of the blase responses some people have to their health, it was a light hearted reminder to always take these problems seriously and I find peoples responses almost comical at times. So I think you're both right to say this isn't but is funny.
It was also an attempt to write a poem on the most ridiculous subject - haemorrhoids.
I have written a few 'Disease' poems which range from Parkinsons and anorexia nervosa to colds and the above.
I'll post some more soon.
Mark
I wrote it because of the blase responses some people have to their health, it was a light hearted reminder to always take these problems seriously and I find peoples responses almost comical at times. So I think you're both right to say this isn't but is funny.
It was also an attempt to write a poem on the most ridiculous subject - haemorrhoids.
I have written a few 'Disease' poems which range from Parkinsons and anorexia nervosa to colds and the above.
I'll post some more soon.
Mark
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Re: Oh it’s not much.
The way it was written it could just as easily have referred to colon cancer, ergo the response.
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Re: Oh it’s not much.
Exactly my point Heinz, people want a quick fix and don't listen to what we should be doing. Even if it is a minor problem you need to make sure it is minor.
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