Follow On (co-write by Jade and Amathir)(nov. challenge)
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Love poems and poems of romantic interest (not erotica).
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Love poems and poems of romantic interest (not erotica).
Autoprune 12 months.
- Jade
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Follow On (co-write by Jade and Amathir)(nov. challenge)
I followed you
into the luminous world
of literature
listening to your lyrical
promises
perfectly played to tear
me in two.
I saw you in a perfect square -
a window, a frame.
your tongue slipping, sliding,
through your serenade
the strangeness of it....
A beauty - statuesque -
bathing in magnolia moonlight;
starlight sprinkling
on your soft mahogany hair;
a halo
the horizon in a half-step
in motion with the pouring light
yearning for reunion - adoration lost, stolen
gravity the vandal
What once was a work of art -
now graffiti on a shadowed wall
leaving me holding on
hoping
Pleading for your return.
I know its late... but better late than never, right?
into the luminous world
of literature
listening to your lyrical
promises
perfectly played to tear
me in two.
I saw you in a perfect square -
a window, a frame.
your tongue slipping, sliding,
through your serenade
the strangeness of it....
A beauty - statuesque -
bathing in magnolia moonlight;
starlight sprinkling
on your soft mahogany hair;
a halo
the horizon in a half-step
in motion with the pouring light
yearning for reunion - adoration lost, stolen
gravity the vandal
What once was a work of art -
now graffiti on a shadowed wall
leaving me holding on
hoping
Pleading for your return.
I know its late... but better late than never, right?
aimed with angry art,
words can sting like all things
but it's silence that breaks the heart
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- heinzs
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Re: Follow On (co-write by Jade and Amathir)(nov. challenge)
An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed Be.
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Re: Follow On (co-write by Jade and Amathir)(nov. challenge)
Beautiful imagery...
I think of a muse gone dry...perhaps just where I am at the moment. I could feel the gravity pulling down the inspiration, the magic.
Lovely write you two!!
I think of a muse gone dry...perhaps just where I am at the moment. I could feel the gravity pulling down the inspiration, the magic.
Lovely write you two!!
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Re: Follow On (co-write by Jade and Amathir)(nov. challenge)
Yeah it's a tad late but still very much appreciated. I loved this. It follows the pattern of all the other entries ... very rich in imagrey -- lots of images floating around in my head now.
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Re: Follow On (co-write by Jade and Amathir)(nov. challenge)
wow
"You leapt into the abyss, but find, It only goes up to your knees"... Nick Cave
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Re: Follow On (co-write by Jade and Amathir)(nov. challenge)
A beautifully created, co-authored writing that has been moved from the Challenge forum to this forum to allow others to enjoy.
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Re: Follow On (co-write by Jade and Amathir)(nov. challenge)
An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed Be.
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- Jade
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Re: Follow On (co-write by Jade and Amathir)(nov. challenge)
I'm glad I posted this here otherwise it would have been lost.
aimed with angry art,
words can sting like all things
but it's silence that breaks the heart
click here to view **MY ARCHIVE**
Re: Follow On (co-write by Jade and Amathir)(nov. challenge)
This... is damn good.
Not much more i could say to that
Not much more i could say to that
Never trust a ninja with a banana peel... It's certain demise.
- Jade
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Re: Follow On (co-write by Jade and Amathir)(nov. challenge)
aimed with angry art,
words can sting like all things
but it's silence that breaks the heart
click here to view **MY ARCHIVE**
- Jade
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Re: Follow On (co-write by Jade and Amathir)(nov. challenge)
Has anyone spoken to or seen amathir?
aimed with angry art,
words can sting like all things
but it's silence that breaks the heart
click here to view **MY ARCHIVE**
- heinzs
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Re: Follow On (co-write by Jade and Amathir)(nov. challenge)
An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed Be.
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- heinzs
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Re: Follow On (co-write by Jade and Amathir)(nov. challenge)
Amathir is posting on PoetryPages at Facebook as Gavin Smith.
An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed Be.
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