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OriOnpheOnix
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Almost

Post by OriOnpheOnix » Wed Oct 31, 2007 11:02 pm

Almost

Sometimes
You just feel you could be deleted
Like words unspoken
In the smoke of the scene
That could not be seen
The pain / so serene
Seeming design
Of a greater plan
To which you submit

To fade / into the oblivion you have made
With mind /

All the world is crashing
Like the waves /
And I madman / am slashing
At the canvases / sent to flames

Thinking of lost loves /
Wondering if they still remember /
December /
Do they still remember /
The me / that they used to see /

Keep me safe in the pages of that diary

As I deteriorate / with my fate /
Or purely elevate /
With angelic wings /
Angelic eyes /
Angelic everything /

I saw the art of death
And I almost cried
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-Nirvana Inferno-

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Re: Almost

Post by northstar » Thu Nov 01, 2007 6:04 am

that poem is different in your poetry work
i like it
espessially the 2 last stanzas(lines)
i saw the body of your spirit ..my friend
sometimes you scared me
sometimes i touch you..sometimes i love you

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