A Spontaneus Praise

nrip4life · Post by **nrip4life** » Sun Aug 21, 2005 10:23 pm

i struggle to perfect myself when by your side
even after i realize my true self emerges when with you
your gestures your body language stills my tongue
you look at me and wonder my thoughts
when all im doing is painting a memory
adoring that which you cannot see yourself
ive centered my entire world around your heart
if two people were ever one it is our bond
rarely am i around to hold you
but how often we make love on an astral level
you send your tears through the rain
and i smile upon your bed through moonlight
i have become drunk with the longings of your touch
i envy those who take for granted the wonders of your prescence
oh when shall i be set free to roam with you among the fields
our circamstances our torchered by mans law
but according to heaven wishes we are to be merged
each day when you torment my mind with pleasure
and rip at my heart with burning love
the trinity of my being unites
only to find i cannot share with you the wonders i see
i dont not speak to create a poem
i do not write to astound your heart my love
i simply must release the desire within my soul
so full of you i cannot contain all i wish to keep

NJSadness · Post by **NJSadness** » Mon Aug 22, 2005 8:00 am

Beautiful write and so very expressive...

Excellent job!

nrip4life · Post by **nrip4life** » Mon Aug 22, 2005 10:25 pm

Debbie · Post by **Debbie** » Tue Aug 23, 2005 5:48 pm

so full of you i cannot contain all i wish to keep

Love the way you put this...
a great write once again nrip straight from the heart..

nrip4life · Post by **nrip4life** » Tue Aug 23, 2005 6:22 pm

Jess Schue · Post by **Jess Schue** » Wed Aug 24, 2005 8:32 pm

holy shit...i've really been missin' out...this is amazing..wow, i am entirely speechless right now...i love you~Jess*

nrip4life · Post by **nrip4life** » Fri Aug 26, 2005 8:20 pm

lol yea you have...i just have to get this cheesy stuff out ya know...thanks for the inspiration hun ...its all for you....keep the faith...

Tom Watson · Post by **Tom Watson** » Sat Aug 26, 2006 12:20 pm

Wow!
Roaming through the back pages of worn tracks of long gone tears and some little puddles that remain, I fell upon this.
To have one's heart filled to the max and still ache for more can only lead to the overflow of beautiful poetry such as this.

tom

nrip4life · Post by **nrip4life** » Sat Sep 02, 2006 7:31 pm

...i learned about myself more from reading it over..thanks tom

Haroo · Post by **Haroo** » Thu Sep 07, 2006 12:32 pm

~am in total awe with this poem~
Y am I not the one who wrote this

Friggin awesome!!!!

Jess Schue · Post by **Jess Schue** » Sun Aug 12, 2007 10:47 am

you send your tears through the rain
and i smile upon your bed through moonlight
i have become drunk with the longings of your touch
i envy those who take for granted the wonders of your prescence

Tom Watson · Post by **Tom Watson** » Tue Mar 03, 2009 2:40 pm

There are so many lines that can stand by themselves in this, it needs to be read again and again...

Tom

Moushka · Post by **Moushka** » Thu Mar 05, 2009 12:58 pm

.....meet virginia.........I can't wait to,, meet virginia

nrip4life · Post by **nrip4life** » Thu Mar 26, 2009 7:52 am

moushka- ?????

Moushka · Post by **Moushka** » Mon Apr 06, 2009 1:56 pm

It's the lyrics of a song on the radio........really like this write, reading it again.......

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