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The Beast

Post by Eternum 1 » Fri May 06, 2005 5:15 pm

Does she lament
the broken body
lying there
Her silent lover who only
wanted to stare
at her ample, lush
round derriere

Was it a bullet or the fall
that stopped his giant heart
Was it her tiny push
that broke his grasp
gently encircling
her well formed tush

This much is true
at the very least
About the tale of King Kong;
It was Booty
that killed the Beast
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Post by ashideena » Fri May 06, 2005 5:54 pm

Yay, Kitties!!!!!
Good write.

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Tairen

Post by Tairen » Fri May 06, 2005 9:24 pm

hmm... interesting.. and different.. i cant quite comphrend everything.. and i think its best that way.. nice job

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Re: The Beast

Post by negatvone » Sat May 07, 2005 3:19 am

Eternum 1 wrote:
It was Booty
killed the Beast
Possibly "That killed the beast" would be acceptable?
I may just be to old and not know the new slang. Do we leave out important parts of scentances now?

God I feel old. :mrgreen:

I thought this needed revision.

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Post by Eternum 1 » Sat May 07, 2005 10:03 am

Hey Ashidena:

Thanks for commenting!

:cool:

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Post by Eternum 1 » Sat May 07, 2005 10:06 am

Hey Tairen:

Pretty simple really. King Kong liked Fay Wrays caboose and died for it.

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Post by Eternum 1 » Sat May 07, 2005 10:11 am

Hey Negatv:

I agree. My son uses the term 'booty' which may derive from the english word 'boot' for trunk. Also when he sees a 'full figured' female he refers to parts of the anatomy as ' junk in the trunk'.

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Post by negatvone » Sat May 07, 2005 12:08 pm

Hehe, I see youngins on the street these days and I can barely comprehend them. I'm only 26 for God's sake!

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Post by Friend_forever » Sun May 08, 2005 11:15 pm

Nice write ET... I already am a fan... and I can see you have a lot of fan following...

Great write :thumbsup:
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Post by Eternum 1 » Fri May 13, 2005 10:18 pm

Only XXVI Negatvone! Enjoy every 'I' my friend :cool:

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Post by Eternum 1 » Fri May 13, 2005 10:19 pm

Hey Nosh,

I'm a fan of yours between the 2 of us we should be able to make a breeze :cool:

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Post by Debbie » Sat May 14, 2005 8:41 am

And so ends the story of beauty and the beast...well maybe not..for there are so many tales written in different forms...where beauty captivates the heart of a beast...
I like this one ET..well put together..that show I might add was a sad one..I remember watching it so many times years ago..

thanks for sharing once again.. brilliant artiste..
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Post by Eternum 1 » Wed May 25, 2005 6:49 pm

:cool: thank you, Debbie. True its just another version of Hunchback or Cryanno de Begerac but it still plays well.

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Post by Stefanie » Tue May 31, 2005 4:18 pm

I liked this one very much.... :shock: And your other poems too...English ain't my motherlanguage...So I have to read it twice and use a vocabulary time to time...But I realy like it...Love from Stefanie

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Post by Eternum 1 » Sat Jun 04, 2005 10:42 pm

Thanks Stefanie. Appreciate your commenting. :cool:

As a Bob Dylan fan you are allowed to make up your own vocabulary. It's avant garde if no one else understands a word you say :mrgreen:
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