moonflowers highlights June 09

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moonflowers highlights June 09

Post by moonflower » Thu Jul 02, 2009 6:12 pm

hey everyone! :hello: wow, summer is really here for sure!..busy, busy days.. :grin: at the funny farm there were 9 postings for June!..thats wonderful! :grin: ..(last month there were only 3!)..thanks so much to all who stopped by..well, here is the one in the spotlight .... :grin: :grin:


Candy Message Hearts.....written by Eternum 1

A sweet heart confection was my offered fealty,
a childish affection offered up on bended knee.

Their words evoke feelings, a child cannot express
scripted hidden meanings, as to what they might suggest

I picked a pink heart seething with emotional intent,
with a nervous sort of bleating, of what it might have meant.

Her reply was a bullet, her aim was sharp and true
like a prisoner in a docket, I didn't have a clue.

Certain that all happiness kept in lifes reserves,
were lost in the emptiness of her scornful words

With all the wisdom that a ten year old's imbued,
she replied with derision, "I'd never marry you".

My token of engagment was my hope to take a wife,
but fourth grade estrangement was to be my lot in life.

I look upon the candy and recall the angst, the pain
for the gigggling Mandy and the love I felt in vain.

So, began the evolution, to the creature that you know
My wretched devolution from childish Romeo.


well i hope everyone comes back to visit more in July!..thanks again to all of you! :grin: ...Have a safe and happy 4th! :hello: :grin:
inside each soul there is music...let the music play..

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