hi everyone!..wow, Fall is really winding down and winter is just around the corner well here in the funny farm there were 8 new postings for the month of October..thanks to all who took the time to drop in and visit!..here is the poem to be highlighted ..
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i sit.....written by berlie
here
I sit
and stare at
the computer
the cursor just blinks
and I swear the mouse winked
yet no words come forth
to grace these keys
and so I
still sit
here
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well hey thanks again everyone for stopping by ..come on back again now that its November!
moonflowers highlights October 07
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Re: moonflowers October highlights
I like the way this goes.
L1: 1 syllable
L2: 2 syllables
L3: 3 syllables
L4: 4 syllables
L5: 5 syllables
L6: 6 syllables
L7: 5 syllables
L8: 4syllables ....etc.
Good metrical extension...good poetry.
L1: 1 syllable
L2: 2 syllables
L3: 3 syllables
L4: 4 syllables
L5: 5 syllables
L6: 6 syllables
L7: 5 syllables
L8: 4syllables ....etc.
Good metrical extension...good poetry.
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