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Asyndeton form

Post by richie » Sat Apr 22, 2006 12:48 am

Asyndeton form
List of words, phrases, or expressions without conjunctions Such as “And” in, I, and, or, to link them.
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PRAYER

Remembering again that mystery, which binds me still
though reversed plummeting of our spirits now.
Entranced always by life’s vista, powerless will,
as moonlight once more returns, to you only bow.
Those happy days, amid the splendour of youth
Unconscious visions, then sorrowfully cast aside.
Regaining scruples once turned from your truth
Life’s journey tempted, each burden forever hide.
Leaves crisper now, while grass replenished sweet
Hearts serene palpitating beneath each moonlight's air.
Appealing once more for mercy always given there
for who is greater than thee, through time shall meet
Profoundest thoughts, though my melancholy never would
Dissever this poor soul, to Heavens door finely understood







Richard Taylor
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Richie..

Post by Debbie » Sat Apr 22, 2006 5:46 pm

wow Richie you sure are good at these differen styles... :bow: :bow: :bow:
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Post by richie » Thu May 04, 2006 12:25 pm

:hello: :hello: :hello: :hello:

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Post by heinzs » Sun May 14, 2006 1:22 pm

We had this form as a challenge some time back... will have to peruse the archives to find the entries. I seem to recall they were all very good.


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Post by richie » Sat May 20, 2006 8:30 am

yes me and ven won H look for ven winning last year sometime if you do athough i found this in my file i have lost that prayer i wrote for the pope [when he died] its the only time i ever won a poem of the week :grin: if you find it i'd love to have it back its lost otherwise

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Post by heinzs » Sat May 20, 2006 2:25 pm

Actually the earliest poem I have for you now since you've returned is dated February 2006.

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Post by richie » Sat May 20, 2006 11:02 pm

my own fault its one of the best prayers and i just can't find it and with my site closing when i became ill i thought i'd talken everything but can't seam to find it anywhere oh well not your fault
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Post by heinzs » Sun May 21, 2006 11:02 am

This is a sad lesson. It's still possible that it is available somewhere... Google has archives that go back quite a way. Do you remember any of the lines? It might show up on a google search using a line from the poem.

I almost religiously make hard copies of anything I write as well as periodic CD backups of all data files. Even then I lose things because of the ephemeral nature of cyberspace itself.

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Post by richie » Sun May 21, 2006 11:37 am

its possible kimmy my co admin has it she copies everything on hard drive as i am only on a 1 neg at present i will go through my webpages i have about 7 full ones now it must be somewhere H no i wrote it the day he died an impulse which turned out very well i think.
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Post by heinzs » Thu Jul 05, 2007 11:25 am

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