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Resources for victims of abuse seeking help and support. Also good sources for those wishing to help victims of abuse. Post your own stories or impressions of The Ravyn here.

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ShaylaBlade
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Post by ShaylaBlade » Wed Mar 22, 2006 7:24 pm

I dont know why I'm posting this but I am. I just keep these feelings bottled up inside so I'm going to share a small peice about it. Hopefully some of the weight will lift off of my shoulders.

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Are you pleased with my pain?
Your eyes twinkle with amusement
As you rip and shred
Tattered clothing barely hanging off of my body
A cynical smile creases your lips
Your rough hands scan my flesh
Your muscles tense
I plead for you to come to an end
Just leave me be
I cant do a thing
I'm too weak
If only my strength could tower yours
Maybe I would torture you
Don't leave someone you love for someone you like because that someone you like will leave you for someone they love.

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Post by Debbie » Thu Mar 23, 2006 4:54 am

HI ShaylaBlade..I've been reading some of your work...seems you have much bottled up inside as you said..it is good to be able to get it out....
you're poem hit my heart..and I felt the pain in each line and inbetween.....
:crying: there are many resources in here if you need help and there are some people in here with wide shoulders and open arms to welcome you...

love Debbie :hugs:
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Reach Out And Love Someone
Slow Down And Look around
You Will Find Someone Who Needs You.....

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Post by ShaylaBlade » Thu Mar 23, 2006 3:19 pm

i appreciate the offer but i think i will be okay
Don't leave someone you love for someone you like because that someone you like will leave you for someone they love.

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Post by Debbie » Thu Mar 23, 2006 6:37 pm

:thumbsup:
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Slow Down And Look around
You Will Find Someone Who Needs You.....

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Post by thief of dreams » Thu Mar 23, 2006 8:23 pm

dont think you will be ok, know you will be ok.. sounds cliche as all hell.. but it works, and helps...
"Thoughts are the shadows of our feelings - always darker, emptier and simpler."
Friedrich Nietzsche

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Post by ShaylaBlade » Fri Mar 24, 2006 5:43 pm

let me rephrase that then :grin:

I WILL BE OKAY :thumbsup:
Don't leave someone you love for someone you like because that someone you like will leave you for someone they love.

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