~Ravyn's Impression~

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~Ravyn's Impression~

Post by jeannerené » Thu May 20, 2004 3:22 pm

~ Ravyn's Impression~


For one brief moment
The Ravyn perched upon my shoulder,
And paused with me in a shadow
That lay across both our paths . . .
Contemplating the view
Behind us and to that which lay ahead.
Just a single footfall of my time
To be released to the wind,
And remembered for the gentle
Brush of her feathers against my tears.


Thank you again Jenn.
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... and his words purge up and outward,
expelled and onward through desert dust swallowed,
sands he says that gorge on simple sensibilities.
And, now he spits fragments, grit, extended vowels and elongated syllables
over cracked lips. Their sounds fall
piling round his boots…
~ jeannerené

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Post by spanky2007 » Thu May 20, 2004 7:24 pm

This is a great poem. I don't think you could pay a better tribute to anyone.
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~*-In the end, we will remember not the words of our enemies, but the silence of our friends-*~~*-Live today, fight tomrrow-*~

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Post by thief of dreams » Thu May 20, 2004 8:37 pm

this is a very beautiful tribute Jeanne and also so true of who she is... seemingly always quiet yet when she does engage in conversation it can be the most heart felt conversation a person can ever share...
"Thoughts are the shadows of our feelings - always darker, emptier and simpler."
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Post by Miyu » Fri May 21, 2004 9:45 pm

a great tribute jeanne.

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Post by heinzs » Thu Aug 18, 2005 7:23 pm

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Post by jeannerené » Mon Aug 22, 2005 1:25 pm

Thank you Heinz........

You know Jenn's spirit is felt here ... everyday........

...jeanne...
... and his words purge up and outward,
expelled and onward through desert dust swallowed,
sands he says that gorge on simple sensibilities.
And, now he spits fragments, grit, extended vowels and elongated syllables
over cracked lips. Their sounds fall
piling round his boots…
~ jeannerené

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~breathe~


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Post by Debbie » Mon Aug 22, 2005 3:51 pm

A tribute that made my heart leap...and want to cry...

you are so beautiful a human being dear Jean..what a heart you have...and what a lovely talent...

She is at rest now... her memory will live forever in the hearts of those who knew and loved her...
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