more dreams

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Wmartin
Clearwater Poet
Posts: 14
Joined: Mon Oct 06, 2014 9:48 am
Tag line: bruce

more dreams

Post by Wmartin » Mon Dec 22, 2014 10:48 am

dream times nine
frozen days
land laid waste
by the armies of
ignorance and haste
I feel it
draining my soul
and tearing at the strings
of my existence. cold
and dead.
people, gagging in the streets
of their land.
choked by the hate they
fed their children.

I see a boy dieing in the street
should I ask him for tea.

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Moushka
Blue Sea Poet
Posts: 544
Joined: Sat Jul 21, 2007 3:48 pm
Tag line: Trusting God
Location: Anchorage, Alaska
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Re: more dreams

Post by Moushka » Sat Jan 24, 2015 1:19 pm

I really like the way this flows :computer:
Stuck on Number 2. Learning to begin.
1.Believe 2.Belong 3.Become
1.Awareness 2.Acceptance 3.Action

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