Everyday...

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hope1994
Clearwater Poet
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Tag line: Stay strong
Location: Washington

Everyday...

Post by hope1994 » Tue Dec 24, 2013 10:07 pm

Everyday it gets harder.
Everyday it's like a nightmare
progressing on.
Everyday is another prayer
echoing from my bones
asking god
to take me now.
Everyday I close up more.
Everyday it gets more impossible.
Everyday I feel myself die some more.
Everyday I lay on my bed
wondering how
I'll leave this hell.
I've never felt so much pain

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gordy
Windfall Prophet
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Re: Everyday...

Post by gordy » Wed Dec 25, 2013 9:43 am

it can sure seem like that sometimes, never give up tho....... great emotion in this piece.
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Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword

---Gordy

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heinzs
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Re: Everyday...

Post by heinzs » Thu Dec 26, 2013 8:07 am

Welcome back, and Happy Belated Birthday :grin:
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nekot
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Re: Everyday...

Post by nekot » Tue Aug 01, 2017 7:08 pm

What gordy said...
'Great emotion in this piece" describing the dark night (day) of the soul (and body).

I feel the poem is expressing emotional and physical pain.

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