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Travis
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Summers Symphony

Post by Travis » Tue Sep 11, 2012 8:38 am

A choir of cicadas
Sing of Summer's final farewell
Shorter days and cooler nights
A seasons tale ends
The message it sends
Time and all golden glory
Is never lasting
And the soulful story we write
Will take flight
Like birds who soar
If we choose to explore
The chances and the dances
We make and take with one another.
For this moment, like no other
Will never come again...

© ~Travis
Last edited by Travis on Wed Sep 12, 2012 4:50 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Summers Symphony

Post by heinzs » Tue Sep 11, 2012 10:54 pm

Locusts have a bad reputation... lol. Did you consider a choir of crickets?... lol. I like it either way, not being personally prejudiced against locusts. Or perhaps you meant 7-year locusts, which are actually Cicadas... ?

Cheers!


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Re: Summers Symphony

Post by Travis » Wed Sep 12, 2012 4:51 pm

Cicadas is what I had meant, wise sir! :wink:
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Re: Summers Symphony

Post by heinzs » Wed Sep 12, 2012 8:19 pm

Cool... glad to be of assistance.

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