"Food for Thought"

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goldenrod
Babbling Brook Poet
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Location: London, Ontario

"Food for Thought"

Post by goldenrod » Thu Apr 05, 2012 12:48 pm

An owl, in her wisdom,
Sat silent did she,
Surveying the world
From the top of a tree.
.
Tried to talk to a mouse
Who was scurrying by,
But, it would not stop to debate,
With that scourge from the sky!
.
Most of its kin had fallen as prey,
To that owl, near that oak,
Leaving..
Precious little to say!
.
Later, the owl sat in deep silence,
Digesting its thoughts,
And the last of the mouse,
It had so recently caught!
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heinzs
The Fat Cat
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Re: "Food for Thought"

Post by heinzs » Fri Apr 06, 2012 12:44 pm

Aww... I hope it was a different mouse. Good use of rhyme. Not "forced" or stilted.

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goldenrod
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Re: "Food for Thought"

Post by goldenrod » Fri Apr 06, 2012 1:30 pm

Please forgive me for spelling your name wrong Heinzs in the reply to gaspacho. I will try to be more attentive in future! :(
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Re: "Food for Thought"

Post by heinzs » Fri Apr 06, 2012 4:35 pm

lol... actually my name is Heinz. heinzs is my login ID.
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