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hope1994
Clearwater Poet
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shadows

Post by hope1994 » Sun Mar 04, 2012 7:07 pm

Following us around
Never abandoning us
When others do
Look close enough
And you'll see us
Shadows are part
Of history and
The future
They'll never leave
So don't try
You will always fail
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hope1994
Clearwater Poet
Posts: 91
Joined: Fri Apr 15, 2011 3:16 pm
Tag line: Stay strong
Location: Washington

Re: shadows

Post by hope1994 » Sun Mar 04, 2012 7:25 pm

:critique: :critique: :thewave: :thewave: :hello:
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heinzs
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Re: shadows

Post by heinzs » Sun Mar 04, 2012 9:45 pm

A very pleasant little tribute to the shadow we so often tend to ignore. Reminds me of Peter Pan losing his and having to have it sewn back on. Cheers Hope!

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hope1994
Clearwater Poet
Posts: 91
Joined: Fri Apr 15, 2011 3:16 pm
Tag line: Stay strong
Location: Washington

Re: shadows

Post by hope1994 » Tue Mar 06, 2012 9:18 am

thanks heinzs
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