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Clearwater Poet
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Location: Ontario, Canada


Post by sean1234 » Mon Sep 26, 2011 7:35 am

Here in this garden
of paved streets
and ever growing people
I sit
as the city rises
to full bloom
by its own music
weeds mixed with flowers
add to all
that encases its beauty
for here
along endless curb
both beauty and beast
feed upon the lush grasses of humanity........sean

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enchanted by the magic
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Location: longview tx

Re: Garden

Post by moonflower » Mon Nov 07, 2011 11:14 am

i like this!..the images are great..i could 'see' the city streets coming alive!.. :thumbsup: :grin:
inside each soul there is music...let the music play..

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Clearwater Poet
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Re: Garden

Post by bubba » Thu Nov 17, 2011 4:08 pm

I"ve been living in a park for about a year... definitely "beauty and beast" at the same time.
"The weak can never forgive. Forgiveness is the attribute of the strong." Mahatma Gandhi

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Babbling Brook Poet
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Location: New York City

Re: Garden

Post by FirestoneFeinberg » Fri Dec 02, 2011 7:01 am

Imaginative. Creative. Great Rhythm. --FF
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The Transformed One
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Location: North Eastern, IN

Re: Garden

Post by Travis » Fri Feb 10, 2012 11:39 am

Nice images and a great message!

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The soul becomes dyed with the color of its thoughts. ~Marcus Aurelius


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Seafoam Poet
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Re: Garden

Post by purplelionness » Sun Feb 26, 2012 1:37 am

We forget to look for the beauty all around us and and take things for granted. Nice you took time to stop and smell the roses

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God's Poetess
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Re: Garden

Post by Debbie » Wed Feb 29, 2012 7:45 am

Very creative Sean..and it wasn't hard to see what you were writing...Welcome to the Pages hope to read more of your work...

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