models want everything

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ShadowLover
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Tag line: emo dark
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models want everything

Post by ShadowLover » Mon Jun 13, 2011 1:58 pm

the mirror only shows skin deep
light shining on perfect skin ... but is it real?
heels standing 6 inches talll.. graceful is the attack
breathe out breathe in and look inside the cracks
your inperfections are sitting in front of you
* kill me with music *

hope1994
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Re: models want everything

Post by hope1994 » Tue Jun 14, 2011 3:56 pm

it's strange but i am ok with it it's not my favorite but it's ok

ShadowLover
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Re: models want everything

Post by ShadowLover » Tue Jun 14, 2011 5:17 pm

what do you mean by strange?
* kill me with music *

charles.degollado
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Re: models want everything

Post by charles.degollado » Fri Aug 05, 2011 7:31 pm

graceful is the attack
My favorite line.

I see not a "graceful attack",
but rather, "grace" itself is the attack.

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