Dreams Discovered
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- Eric
- A Poet in the Rain
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Dreams Discovered
I woke myself from crying ... my dreams tore me apart
I wish someone could figure out .. help these dreams depart
What it is that I was seeing .... had me shaking to the bone
It had reminded me of some times ... some bad times I have known
I could not stop the running ... I'm not as fast as in my youth
Not sure of what I was running from ... still searching for its truth
My heart was pounding so dam hard ... I could not bare to speak
I felt the weight was pushing down ... my legs had grown so weak
Why do we always revert ... to old habits and mistake?
Why does it always shine its face .. while I am not awake?
I tend to fear what s in my mind ... when I close my eyes
When they are open I can fight ... and fend off my old lies
But when I sleep my dreams discover... things I have tried to hide
I seem to erase it from my dreams .. how I am the man who tried
Am I to weak to ovecome ... these thoughts that haunt my mind?
Are these troubles in my dreams, and in my wake affined?
© 2011 Eric R. Garcia. All rights reserved
I wish someone could figure out .. help these dreams depart
What it is that I was seeing .... had me shaking to the bone
It had reminded me of some times ... some bad times I have known
I could not stop the running ... I'm not as fast as in my youth
Not sure of what I was running from ... still searching for its truth
My heart was pounding so dam hard ... I could not bare to speak
I felt the weight was pushing down ... my legs had grown so weak
Why do we always revert ... to old habits and mistake?
Why does it always shine its face .. while I am not awake?
I tend to fear what s in my mind ... when I close my eyes
When they are open I can fight ... and fend off my old lies
But when I sleep my dreams discover... things I have tried to hide
I seem to erase it from my dreams .. how I am the man who tried
Am I to weak to ovecome ... these thoughts that haunt my mind?
Are these troubles in my dreams, and in my wake affined?
© 2011 Eric R. Garcia. All rights reserved
Last edited by Eric on Sat Mar 24, 2012 4:54 am, edited 1 time in total.
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- heinzs
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Re: Dreams Discovered
An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed Be.
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- Eric
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Re: Dreams Discovered
So does that mean you liked it lol
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Re: Dreams Discovered
lol it means I read it and thought it deserved more attention than it was getting and I didn't have a lot of time to leave a comment.
An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed Be.
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Re: Dreams Discovered
so how do we get it to have more attention !
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- moonflower
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Re: Dreams Discovered
i like!..just hang in there..the attention seems to come in spurts ...
- Eric
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Re: Dreams Discovered
lol I have alot posted on here but they didnt really get to much attention! :P although my book has now sold over 3100 copies I think it has done very well.
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Re: Dreams Discovered
poem did need more attention, well placed bump heinzs
and moonflower is right, attention comes in spurts round here
i wouldnt worry about it, people read alot but its gotten to whre its like pulling teeth to get people to comment
anyways
good write, good read
and moonflower is right, attention comes in spurts round here
i wouldnt worry about it, people read alot but its gotten to whre its like pulling teeth to get people to comment
anyways
good write, good read
/My first thought was, he lied in every word,
That hoary cripple, with malicious eye
....
......................................
...... And yet
Dauntless the slug-horn to my lips I set,
And blew. ``Childe Roland to the Dark Tower came.''
Childe Roland to the Dark Tower Came
Robert Browning 1812-1889
That hoary cripple, with malicious eye
....
......................................
...... And yet
Dauntless the slug-horn to my lips I set,
And blew. ``Childe Roland to the Dark Tower came.''
Childe Roland to the Dark Tower Came
Robert Browning 1812-1889
- heinzs
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Re: Dreams Discovered
Thanks PP!
An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed Be.
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Re: Dreams Discovered
anytime
/My first thought was, he lied in every word,
That hoary cripple, with malicious eye
....
......................................
...... And yet
Dauntless the slug-horn to my lips I set,
And blew. ``Childe Roland to the Dark Tower came.''
Childe Roland to the Dark Tower Came
Robert Browning 1812-1889
That hoary cripple, with malicious eye
....
......................................
...... And yet
Dauntless the slug-horn to my lips I set,
And blew. ``Childe Roland to the Dark Tower came.''
Childe Roland to the Dark Tower Came
Robert Browning 1812-1889
Re: Dreams Discovered
My little input here is I think that poem is excellent, it made great reading, wish I could write that good.
- FirestoneFeinberg
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Re: Dreams Discovered
Great poem! Easy to read. Easy to understand. Universal subject. I dig. -- David
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- Eric
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Re: Dreams Discovered
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Re: Dreams Discovered
I liked the emotion this piece provoked and the images it conveyed...nice work!
~Travis
~Travis
The soul becomes dyed with the color of its thoughts. ~Marcus Aurelius
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