You have killed me
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- Lady Byron
- Clearwater Poet
- Posts: 59
- Joined: Sun Jan 02, 2005 9:47 am
- Location: Beauvais / France
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You have killed me
You have killed me …
You have killed me …
But it takes me a long time to die.
I have ceased to live,
I hardly exist
In the turmoil of my anxieties
In the grasp of my fears,
Raped by my terrors.
I’m crawling
In the vomit
Of my eternal grief,
In the rain
Of my endless tears.
Deep sadness
Is my shadow.
Sometimes, I take my head
In my hands
And sink into nothingness
Or I cry
They give me pills,
As if pills could
Mend a heart;
As if pills could repair a broken soul.
They drug me
And I sleep in a limbo
Of haunting memories,
Of awesome dreams.
You have killed me…
But it takes me a long time to die.
I have tried to leave
That useless
And painful existence.
But THEY know better
And brought me back to life.
THEY want to shut me
In an asylum,
So that no one can hear my trials
Anymore,
So that no one can see
My bleeding wounds.
So that I stop to be a bother
For Society;
So that you can live on,
Like an honest citizen
Unsuspected.
You have killed me…
But it takes me a long time to die.
You have killed me …
But it takes me a long time to die.
I have ceased to live,
I hardly exist
In the turmoil of my anxieties
In the grasp of my fears,
Raped by my terrors.
I’m crawling
In the vomit
Of my eternal grief,
In the rain
Of my endless tears.
Deep sadness
Is my shadow.
Sometimes, I take my head
In my hands
And sink into nothingness
Or I cry
They give me pills,
As if pills could
Mend a heart;
As if pills could repair a broken soul.
They drug me
And I sleep in a limbo
Of haunting memories,
Of awesome dreams.
You have killed me…
But it takes me a long time to die.
I have tried to leave
That useless
And painful existence.
But THEY know better
And brought me back to life.
THEY want to shut me
In an asylum,
So that no one can hear my trials
Anymore,
So that no one can see
My bleeding wounds.
So that I stop to be a bother
For Society;
So that you can live on,
Like an honest citizen
Unsuspected.
You have killed me…
But it takes me a long time to die.
Si j'étais Dieu, j'aurais pitié du coeur des hommes...
( Arkel / Dans Pelleas et Mélisande )
( Arkel / Dans Pelleas et Mélisande )
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- Seafoam Poet
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Re: You have killed me
how huantingly sad
- Lady Byron
- Clearwater Poet
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Re: You have killed me
Thanks for reading me.
Lady Byron
Lady Byron
Si j'étais Dieu, j'aurais pitié du coeur des hommes...
( Arkel / Dans Pelleas et Mélisande )
( Arkel / Dans Pelleas et Mélisande )
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- Seafoam Poet
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Re: You have killed me
no problem, I enjoyed it, well written
- Lady Byron
- Clearwater Poet
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Re: You have killed me
Thanks again for your visit.
Lady Byron
Lady Byron
Si j'étais Dieu, j'aurais pitié du coeur des hommes...
( Arkel / Dans Pelleas et Mélisande )
( Arkel / Dans Pelleas et Mélisande )
- moonflower
- enchanted by the magic
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Re: You have killed me
this is chilling and so sad! ..im sending you hugs! you have expressed your words well!.. *hugs*
- Lady Byron
- Clearwater Poet
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Re: You have killed me
Thanks for taking the time of reading me.
Lady Byron
Lady Byron
Si j'étais Dieu, j'aurais pitié du coeur des hommes...
( Arkel / Dans Pelleas et Mélisande )
( Arkel / Dans Pelleas et Mélisande )
Re: You have killed me
Very Powerful poetry my Lady. Welcome back to PP.
I prefer to keep an open mind,....but not so much that my brains fall out.- Carl Sagan
Your brain is like an umbrella. It only works when it's open- Someone Smart
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Your brain is like an umbrella. It only works when it's open- Someone Smart
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- Lady Byron
- Clearwater Poet
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Re: You have killed me
Thanks a lot for having the patience to read me. I'm not sure to deserve the compliments. But thank you all the same.
Anyway, I'm not going to keep on posting. I tried doing it again, but it's not for me and now, there are so many people, so many texts, that you can't read and comment all the poems you would like to.
On the top of it, I feel more comfortable, writing what I feel I want to write, without worying if people like it or not, and maybe sharing the poems with a couple of friends.
But again... Thank you for your contribution.
Lady Byron
Anyway, I'm not going to keep on posting. I tried doing it again, but it's not for me and now, there are so many people, so many texts, that you can't read and comment all the poems you would like to.
On the top of it, I feel more comfortable, writing what I feel I want to write, without worying if people like it or not, and maybe sharing the poems with a couple of friends.
But again... Thank you for your contribution.
Lady Byron
Si j'étais Dieu, j'aurais pitié du coeur des hommes...
( Arkel / Dans Pelleas et Mélisande )
( Arkel / Dans Pelleas et Mélisande )
- heinzs
- The Fat Cat
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Re: You have killed me
You need never worry here about whether people like or do not like your writings. We enjoy your participation at whatever level meets with your comfort zone. But in the end you are the one who must decide what that encompasses.
You are always welcome at the Pages, Lady B.
You are always welcome at the Pages, Lady B.
An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed Be.
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- Lady Byron
- Clearwater Poet
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Re: You have killed me
Thanks for taking the time to write to me. You're very thoughtful and I'm grateful for this.
Thank you for your warm welcome too. But I think, I just cannot post on forums. It attracts me. Every time, I think I'm going to like it and it doesn't work. It interferes with my writing.
I'm a solitary writer and never think my stuff is interesting enough to share it... sometimes with a friend or two.
But I regularly visit the "Pages" and read at random. I don't comment, but I read.
So, I'm going back to my solitary writing... Maybe, it's selfish, maybe it's because I can't bore everybody with my texts.
Thanks for all. Long life to the "Pages", a home for a bunch of marvellous poets.
Lady Byron
Thank you for your warm welcome too. But I think, I just cannot post on forums. It attracts me. Every time, I think I'm going to like it and it doesn't work. It interferes with my writing.
I'm a solitary writer and never think my stuff is interesting enough to share it... sometimes with a friend or two.
But I regularly visit the "Pages" and read at random. I don't comment, but I read.
So, I'm going back to my solitary writing... Maybe, it's selfish, maybe it's because I can't bore everybody with my texts.
Thanks for all. Long life to the "Pages", a home for a bunch of marvellous poets.
Lady Byron
Si j'étais Dieu, j'aurais pitié du coeur des hommes...
( Arkel / Dans Pelleas et Mélisande )
( Arkel / Dans Pelleas et Mélisande )
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- Clearwater Poet
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- Location: Somewhere in the Aether
Re: You have killed me
i will miss seeing your avatar; it is so cute and is a joy to see. i've selected it as my computer background, in case you leave.
- Lady Byron
- Clearwater Poet
- Posts: 59
- Joined: Sun Jan 02, 2005 9:47 am
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Re: You have killed me
Thanks for your post. I'm glad you like my avatar. I'm sorry if you miss it. As long as you don't miss the poetry, it's not too bad.
Kind Regards.
Lady Byron
Kind Regards.
Lady Byron
Si j'étais Dieu, j'aurais pitié du coeur des hommes...
( Arkel / Dans Pelleas et Mélisande )
( Arkel / Dans Pelleas et Mélisande )
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- Clearwater Poet
- Posts: 61
- Joined: Mon Aug 16, 2010 8:24 pm
- Tag line: SpawnOfTheRollingAbyss
- Location: Somewhere in the Aether
Re: You have killed me
yes, of course, you and your writings will be missed here too. best wishes!
- budda head
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Re: You have killed me
How close to home that is. You bravely express your self so hauntingly well.
My Pop summed it up well when he said...
"Mike... a woman's love is like the morning dew...
falls on daisies and horse turds just the same".
thanks Pop... which one am I?
"Mike... a woman's love is like the morning dew...
falls on daisies and horse turds just the same".
thanks Pop... which one am I?
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