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Tony Fiona
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lost in memory

Post by Tony Fiona » Sun Dec 28, 2008 12:42 pm

hounded by the memories of a
thousand broken keys
wisps of life dissolving into mist
surrounded by africanized killer bees
bloody faces
run down tears
ghostly voices
hellish shrieks
another round of Irish beers
all the while waiting by this
dusty door,
musty odor
bloody floor
whore to liberty
hounded by the memories of
a thousand broken dreams
flash
before burned up altars
painfull souls
endless screams
never ending
dying dreams
" There's a race of men that can't stay still
A race that don't fit in
They break the hearts of kith and kin
and roam the world at will. " ------------Robert Service
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Mpumelelo Rantsolase
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Re: lost in memory

Post by Mpumelelo Rantsolase » Tue Dec 30, 2008 3:34 am

Wow this is rich, I like your style.

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Tony Fiona
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Re: lost in memory

Post by Tony Fiona » Wed Dec 31, 2008 12:54 pm

thank you, i have been stagnant for a while.
this felt. :bow:
" There's a race of men that can't stay still
A race that don't fit in
They break the hearts of kith and kin
and roam the world at will. " ------------Robert Service
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Cyan
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Re: lost in memory

Post by Cyan » Fri Jan 02, 2009 2:38 pm

I feel you. I haven't had anything to write about except perhaps having nothing to write about!

i've just been feeling opressed by the day to day office work.. weekends spent staring at digital screens... the times in between hardly a refuge... memories of my goals and objectives, recognition of how far away they still are.. wondering how exactly I strayed... where i missed my chances.. if they existed at all

I guess that's a lot to write about in a fashion, but to be honest I don't know that i can appropriatly convey any of it without coming off fairly emotional. and to be honest everything is gray.
"in the bright light of day and even in the happiest moments of our waking spirit we are ordered around a little by the habits of our dreams."
- Nietzsche

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Tony Fiona
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Re: lost in memory

Post by Tony Fiona » Sat Jan 03, 2009 8:11 am

:thumbsup: to a tee
yep that's about it
" There's a race of men that can't stay still
A race that don't fit in
They break the hearts of kith and kin
and roam the world at will. " ------------Robert Service
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Re: lost in memory

Post by heinzs » Thu Nov 18, 2010 5:29 pm

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Re: lost in memory

Post by Queen » Fri Dec 10, 2010 11:34 am

oh tony how i've missed reading your work. this poem would be a great poem for a soldier! :cool:
No one is free.......if you disagree, try to skate board down the street....

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Tony Fiona
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Re: lost in memory

Post by Tony Fiona » Fri Dec 10, 2010 1:22 pm

Queen good to hear from you.
Yes a good poem for a tired soldier
" There's a race of men that can't stay still
A race that don't fit in
They break the hearts of kith and kin
and roam the world at will. " ------------Robert Service
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