Driven
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- The Ravyn
- riding the cyclone
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Driven
What drives you on? You ask of me
Perplexion writ across your face.
The need to win, the need to lose
The need to stay here in the race.
What drives you on? Again you ask
With troubled eyes and furrowed brow.
I need to feel, I need to see
I need to live again somehow.
What drives you on? I need to know.
You say with sharpness in your tone.
The demons of my past, my present
The dismal future, sad, alone.
What drives you on? There has to be
A reason that you act this way.
When you are sleeping in the night
I lie 'wake holding dreams at bay.
What drives you on? You have to tell
So I can see into your soul.
Don't look too closely, shield your eyes
when gazing into that dark hole.
What drives me on? If you must know
I have a long dark tale to tell.
A tale of pain, a tale of lies
What life is truly like ... in Hell.
Perplexion writ across your face.
The need to win, the need to lose
The need to stay here in the race.
What drives you on? Again you ask
With troubled eyes and furrowed brow.
I need to feel, I need to see
I need to live again somehow.
What drives you on? I need to know.
You say with sharpness in your tone.
The demons of my past, my present
The dismal future, sad, alone.
What drives you on? There has to be
A reason that you act this way.
When you are sleeping in the night
I lie 'wake holding dreams at bay.
What drives you on? You have to tell
So I can see into your soul.
Don't look too closely, shield your eyes
when gazing into that dark hole.
What drives me on? If you must know
I have a long dark tale to tell.
A tale of pain, a tale of lies
What life is truly like ... in Hell.
Driven
As am I, Jenn! [img]images/smiles/icon_smile.gif[/img] This is one of my favorites, the questions lead to the strength of the answers! [img]images/smiles/icon_smile.gif[/img]
- ehli'schild
- PP Ambassador
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Driven
whoa... yep, we all have a tale to tell. i've seen some of yours, and its my hope that the world at large, the next generation, whoever can learn from people like us and stop the cycle. praise for you poem. [img]images/smiles/icon_cool.gif[/img]
Driven
Wow, [img]images/smiles/icon_cool.gif[/img]
Driven
This is simply amazing to me.
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I lie 'wake holding dreams at bay. </font><hr /></blockquote><font size="2" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">I thought I was the only one that tried to keep dreams away. anyways, this deserves to be seen again by more readers! <img border="0" title="" alt="[Smile]" src="smile.gif" />
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</font><blockquote><font size="1" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">quote:</font><hr /><font size="2" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif"> When you are sleeping in the night
I lie 'wake holding dreams at bay. </font><hr /></blockquote><font size="2" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">I thought I was the only one that tried to keep dreams away. anyways, this deserves to be seen again by more readers! <img border="0" title="" alt="[Smile]" src="smile.gif" />
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- The Reaper
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Driven
A piece of art of such excellency. Wonderfully sad.
- Raven Aurora
- Immortal, Interrupted
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Driven
I suppose those same things drive me. Well done.
Many blessings,
Raven Aurora
Many blessings,
Raven Aurora
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