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Post by The Ravyn » Fri Aug 09, 2002 9:13 am

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Disconnected
I know there is a world out there
Other than the one I have been made to see
A world of light
A world of hope
A world of happiness
But my world is restricted
To the confines of these four walls
Of my own fear maddened mind
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Post by moonflower » Fri Aug 09, 2002 12:01 pm

hi raven..this is a great poem!..i wrote one by the same title, dont think its posted here tho..i like yours better anyway..great work!..
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Post by heinzs » Sun Jan 25, 2004 5:36 pm

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Post by JukotoxKanashimi » Sun Jan 25, 2004 6:13 pm

awesome we are always rulled by the fear inside of us but we can overcome nicely written ravyn
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Post by thief of dreams » Wed Jan 28, 2004 9:23 pm

alot of new poems unfolding from that mind as of late J? or just oldies being resurected? it only matters because we hate to see you sink down. but oh how we enjoy the hauntingly rich poetry...
"Thoughts are the shadows of our feelings - always darker, emptier and simpler."
Friedrich Nietzsche
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Post by His Barbie Doll » Wed Jan 28, 2004 9:33 pm

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This is most awesome Ravyn!!! Great work!!!

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Me... Barbie D... :wink:
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Post by The Ravyn » Thu Jan 29, 2004 5:43 am

thank you all! *s*

terry ... heinz has been :bump: ing again ... these are old ones
take my hand if you don't know where you're goin' ... i'll understand .... i've lost the way myself ...
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