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Post by The Ravyn » Sun Jul 14, 2002 3:02 pm

O! What dark and brooding demon
Doest thou yet perceive?
Lying abed amidst the down and lace
Eye flitting to the aperture.
'Tis but a shadow of thine own self
Gazing back with baleful eye!
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Post by heinzs » Sun Jul 14, 2002 4:19 pm

Love this classical stanza... MORE, MORE! (misquoth the Ravyn)

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Post by Op DDay2001 » Sun Jul 14, 2002 4:22 pm

Aye... we all have we demons don't we... I just keep a constant vigile over mine.. never to slip or to do anything that could set them free...

Good poem nicely written.
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Post by MJPease » Mon Jul 15, 2002 9:50 pm

Hello Ravyn, "Tis but a shadow of thine own self" definitely classical, brilliant. [img]images/smiles/icon_wink.gif[/img]
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Post by bags123 » Tue Jul 16, 2002 7:03 am

Rayven,
I love the classical persona this evokes. Nicely written and so true.
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Post by ehli'schild » Tue Jul 16, 2002 10:22 pm

nice...more of the same from me...
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Post by The Ravyn » Sun Jul 28, 2002 12:07 pm

ty all ... it's kinda funny but ... do any of you remember john and his 'elegance' tirade a few months ago? he had a poem that he wanted everyone to analyze and it didn't go quite as he had planned ... and i submitted this little snippet ... which i believe took me about 45 seconds to complete ... as another offering for analysis ... anyway john took his thread and went home and i never got my poem analyzed [img]images/smiles/icon_wink.gif[/img]
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Post by heinzs » Sat Feb 21, 2004 8:27 pm

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An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed Be.
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Post by the quiet poet » Sat Feb 21, 2004 8:28 pm

Brilliant! :cheers:
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Post by JukotoxKanashimi » Sat Feb 21, 2004 8:45 pm

Bloody brilliant. I loved the classical words in it...ah old times... :shock:
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Post by kuperian4ever » Mon Feb 23, 2004 9:35 pm

How quickly the cream of the crop can hop out
I quite enjoyed the classical side and also rather
enjoyed the message inlayed within . Very good
pen, Rav..very good.
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