Please Tell me Why

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Please Tell me Why

Post by Black Wolf's Blood » Thu Oct 05, 2006 11:56 am

When you're with me,
I feel free...
I'm careless...
I believe that I can do anything...
that I'm a good person.
I know that you'll never let me down.
Your touch calms me...
Makes it so that I can stand life.
But suddenly,
you snatch your hand back;
making my restless for death;
Life too suffocating.
You look at me in disgust,
shaking your head and walking away;
leaving me in the dark once more.
Making me wander this darkness alone.
I don't understand!
Do you hate me that much?
Do you really want me lost in the darkness of hate?
Do you really want me to carry out my suicidal thoughts?
I just want to understand "why".
Was it too much to take?
I miss your touch...
I miss the freedom it gave me.
I miss everything...
Please tall me "why".
I'm ready to die now.
But before I go,
I have to know...
Please tell me why.


copyright Black Wolf's Blood 10/5/06
In his embrace you found yourself. In his kiss you were born. In his words you learned. In his heart you loved. In his absense you hurt.

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Post by Debbie » Thu Oct 05, 2006 4:34 pm

there's that question WHY again and so many of us have that question we love to have answered...you may never find out why...but you can go on with life and accomplish something even better..by never allowing yourself to be in the position of someone asking you the question why... :wink: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :darn:

I sometimes hate that question WHY....you've expressed yourself well in this poem as you have the others......take care....always a friend if you happen to need one... :hugs:
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Post by thief of dreams » Thu Oct 05, 2006 11:17 pm

I like to believe that we dont need answers to the most painful questions, we just dont need them to be complete. we can accept them as unanswerable and continue to live our lives, without them or their answers, even if they are still there. Simply smile as you walk away and don't let you become them...

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Post by Black Wolf's Blood » Fri Oct 06, 2006 1:56 pm

huh. interesting the things u guys say. it kinda makes u think about everything differently. it makes life fun that way. thanz guys
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Black Wolf's Blood

Post by Debbie » Sat Oct 07, 2006 7:04 pm

We are here for you..so don't be shy okay....take care.... :hugs:
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Post by Black Wolf's Blood » Tue Oct 17, 2006 12:14 pm

yay1 i know thanx u guys
In his embrace you found yourself. In his kiss you were born. In his words you learned. In his heart you loved. In his absense you hurt.

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