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Daddy
Daddy...
my daddy...
The touch so cruel.
Daddy...
my daddy...
The hands that bruise.
I lost my voice at school today.
My throat tearing and raw from my screams.
I love my daddy.
The glaring eyes hold only hate.
I love my mommy, too.
I call out to her, but she doesnt seem to hear.
My mommy would never let anyone hurt me.
She watches as his hand lands upon my pale, child's flesh.
My daddy kisses me goodnight.
The brutal kiss bruises my mouth and makes my lips split and bleed.
My daddy holds me in bed sometimes when I cant sleep.
The fierce thrusts tearing and splitting untried boy's flesh.
My daddy sometimes punishes me when I'm bad.
Lips and the corner of my mouth splits as he shoves the hard thing of flesh into my mouth over and over again.
It hurts, it hurts.
Blood oozes from the cruelly stretched, torn, and brutally used hole.
I love my daddy.
The hand that lands on pale flesh.
My daddy loves me too.
The yells get louder,
the hands get crueller.
He would never hurt me.
The gun he puts to my head...
The click as he cocks it...
and then...
BANG!!
copyright Black Wolf's Blood 8/31/06
my daddy...
The touch so cruel.
Daddy...
my daddy...
The hands that bruise.
I lost my voice at school today.
My throat tearing and raw from my screams.
I love my daddy.
The glaring eyes hold only hate.
I love my mommy, too.
I call out to her, but she doesnt seem to hear.
My mommy would never let anyone hurt me.
She watches as his hand lands upon my pale, child's flesh.
My daddy kisses me goodnight.
The brutal kiss bruises my mouth and makes my lips split and bleed.
My daddy holds me in bed sometimes when I cant sleep.
The fierce thrusts tearing and splitting untried boy's flesh.
My daddy sometimes punishes me when I'm bad.
Lips and the corner of my mouth splits as he shoves the hard thing of flesh into my mouth over and over again.
It hurts, it hurts.
Blood oozes from the cruelly stretched, torn, and brutally used hole.
I love my daddy.
The hand that lands on pale flesh.
My daddy loves me too.
The yells get louder,
the hands get crueller.
He would never hurt me.
The gun he puts to my head...
The click as he cocks it...
and then...
BANG!!
copyright Black Wolf's Blood 8/31/06
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In his embrace you found yourself. In his kiss you were born. In his words you learned. In his heart you loved. In his absense you hurt.
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Wolf, I moved this to the Ravyn's nest because of the content. It deals with abuse of monumental nature and is too "strong" even for the "Dark Side" forum. If you've read the Ravyn's story you'll understand.
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Danyale,
This did need to be moved to this forum ... as Heinz has said it involves abuse of montumental nature ........
Please browse Ravyn's Forum's .... for advise, help, hotlines and comfort ....
.....Danyale ... don't be alone with this knowledge .... if you need help ...please... get it!
..jeanne
This did need to be moved to this forum ... as Heinz has said it involves abuse of montumental nature ........
Please browse Ravyn's Forum's .... for advise, help, hotlines and comfort ....
.....Danyale ... don't be alone with this knowledge .... if you need help ...please... get it!
..jeanne
... and his words purge up and outward,
expelled and onward through desert dust swallowed,
sands he says that gorge on simple sensibilities.
And, now he spits fragments, grit, extended vowels and elongated syllables
over cracked lips. Their sounds fall
piling round his boots… ~ jeannerené
~breathe~
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expelled and onward through desert dust swallowed,
sands he says that gorge on simple sensibilities.
And, now he spits fragments, grit, extended vowels and elongated syllables
over cracked lips. Their sounds fall
piling round his boots… ~ jeannerené
~breathe~
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lol. i kno. i just dont like to cuz i kno i dont have it bad, and to vent would be bitching to my frendz that have it worse. of, and i wanted to thank u ,thief, and everyone, for wat u've done for me. thanx bunches
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Black Wolf's Blood..this tore my heart out in a sense of the word.....what a tale of pain and sorrow......I don't know what to say except I love you dear heart...here if you need someone...
Reach Out And Love Someone
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i had tears in my eyes when i finished reading this! ..so devastating and sad!..my heart goes out to you..*hugs*..
my thoughts about the ending were to maybe just simply say..
"now im dead".. its just a suggestion..
this poem really touches the reader and allows them to feel the pain and the horror of the situation..i think you are a wonderfully gifted writer..please keep on writing out the pain and the hurt..its therapudic..
my thoughts about the ending were to maybe just simply say..
"now im dead".. its just a suggestion..
this poem really touches the reader and allows them to feel the pain and the horror of the situation..i think you are a wonderfully gifted writer..please keep on writing out the pain and the hurt..its therapudic..
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How about just "the end"?
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<grin> thank u moonflower and heinzs for ur sugestions, and another thank u to u, moonflower, for ur tears. not that i dont appretiate the suggestions, but i was thinking of something a bit more complicated than 'the end' or 'now im dead'. the poem itself is, in my opinion, not simple enough for an ending like that. im sorry! <panicing> please dont take offence (cant spell) to that! its not that im not thankful, but more of i just dont think it fits.
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