there was a mole on your cheek

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there was a mole on your cheek

Post by PoeticMe » Sat Aug 23, 2003 12:01 am

"There's a certain truth to this poem that knocks you on your ass."
So so so very true. Xcess expressed my thoughts exactly. <img border="0" alt="[BowDown]" title="" src="graemlins/notworthy.gif" />

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Post by Friend_forever » Thu Jul 22, 2004 4:51 am

Lovely write!!

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I never realized your eyes were full of
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Post by Floetry Spades » Tue Sep 27, 2005 10:14 pm

This is the first poem I read on the pages....Its provably still my favorite that I've seen here and definatly my fav from Ravyn. May she rest in peace....

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Post by Debbie » Wed Sep 28, 2005 5:48 am

Indeed a sad poem but put together with such beauitful flare..
Rest in piece dear one..rest in peace..
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Post by ninian » Tue May 16, 2006 8:58 am

Strolling through after reading Berlie's post in Open Discussions today and I had to post. The power in these lines is wonderful.
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Post by poetonadryspell » Sun Jul 09, 2006 11:23 am

very powerful, beautiful and sad all at the same time. It is a very nice poem
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Re: there was a mole on your cheek

Post by His Barbie Doll » Mon Jan 28, 2008 2:26 am

Like I really need to say how wonderful this piece is... everyone knows she was an awesome writer!!! :thumbsup: :bow:
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