Desecrated Angel
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- The Ravyn
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Desecrated Angel
drip
falling
wilted
flower
bends
breaks
tears
drip
immoral
abomination
desecrated
angel
clipped
wings
tears
drip
tarnished
silver
molten
brass
unclean
damned
wilted
flower
tears
drip
03/07/2003
Author's Note: scattered like my thoughts ... confused ... like my emotions ... if there was a way of visualizing the pain ... i would have done that as well ... *sad smile*
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falling
wilted
flower
bends
breaks
tears
drip
immoral
abomination
desecrated
angel
clipped
wings
tears
drip
tarnished
silver
molten
brass
unclean
damned
wilted
flower
tears
drip
03/07/2003
Author's Note: scattered like my thoughts ... confused ... like my emotions ... if there was a way of visualizing the pain ... i would have done that as well ... *sad smile*
<small>[ 03-14-2003, 12:20 AM: Message edited by: The Ravyn ]</small>
Desecrated Angel
<img border="0" alt="[Crying]" title="" src="graemlins/cry.gif" /> Terribly sad and aching, Jenn... Beautiful Bird, forgive yourself. So many people care for you, yearn for your peace, ache with your wounds, pray for your spirit. I love you, Jenn. <img border="0" alt="[Valentine]" title="" src="graemlins/valentine.gif" /> <img border="0" title="" alt="[Smile]" src="smile.gif" />
<img border="0" alt="[Smack]" title="" src="graemlins/smack.gif" /> This one is for your stepdad. <img border="0" alt="[Smack]" title="" src="graemlins/smack.gif" /> This one is for the asshole cop. <img border="0" alt="[Smack]" title="" src="graemlins/smack.gif" /> <img border="0" alt="[Smack]" title="" src="graemlins/smack.gif" /> These are for all the other assholes who hurt you. <img border="0" alt="[Devil]" title="" src="graemlins/devilani.gif" /> To the devil with them!!!!
<img border="0" alt="[Smack]" title="" src="graemlins/smack.gif" /> This one is for your stepdad. <img border="0" alt="[Smack]" title="" src="graemlins/smack.gif" /> This one is for the asshole cop. <img border="0" alt="[Smack]" title="" src="graemlins/smack.gif" /> <img border="0" alt="[Smack]" title="" src="graemlins/smack.gif" /> These are for all the other assholes who hurt you. <img border="0" alt="[Devil]" title="" src="graemlins/devilani.gif" /> To the devil with them!!!!
- heinzs
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Desecrated Angel
What Erin said.
<img border="0" alt="[Valentine]" title="" src="graemlins/valentine.gif" />
<img border="0" alt="[Valentine]" title="" src="graemlins/valentine.gif" />
- ehli'schild
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Desecrated Angel
hey, ravyn,
i really like the visual effect, and the words you put into it made the entire meaning "more-so," i'm not sure how else to say it. and you know, erin is right. you, like me, sometimes post old stuff, but yeah, you've gone one with your life and you're not a victim anymore. still, your experiences make your poems all that much more real. <img border="0" alt="[SeeNoEvil]" title="" src="graemlins/seenoevil.gif" />
i really like the visual effect, and the words you put into it made the entire meaning "more-so," i'm not sure how else to say it. and you know, erin is right. you, like me, sometimes post old stuff, but yeah, you've gone one with your life and you're not a victim anymore. still, your experiences make your poems all that much more real. <img border="0" alt="[SeeNoEvil]" title="" src="graemlins/seenoevil.gif" />
- The Ravyn
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Desecrated Angel
*s* ty all! *hugz* for moonie and ehli's .. ok heinzs too *hugz*
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Desecrated Angel
I loved it...It caught my attention and although haunting, I was engaged in the pattern of words ---grand poem------------Alisdaire
- Blaze
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Desecrated Angel
It's amazing what poems can say and do... even just scattered thoughts. It makes you think, life is a poem. Sometimes it's just scattered thoughts, sometimes it has perfect ryhme, sometimes it's free verse when you just don't know how to explain it in rhyme, and other times it's kind of a struggle, like when you just can't think of the perfect word that rhymes. I could go on and on... but I won't <img border="0" title="" alt="[Smile]" src="smile.gif" /> I might start into a "lecture" of some sort... haha.
- Aschmutt
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Desecrated Angel
wow....amazing choice of words and so cleverly put together. i feel your heartache and pain. keep on writing, though, as writing soothes the soul and strengthens the mind. <img border="0" title="" alt="[Smile]" src="smile.gif" />
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