Another Sweet and Sour Dream

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Another Sweet and Sour Dream

Post by The Ravyn » Sun Apr 25, 2004 7:46 am

You came to me again last night
Quieting my fears and bringing me joy
Kissing away the pain of lost years
Holding me in your soft embrace

When I woke up you were gone
But that is only because you were never here
You were only in my mind and in my heart
Another sweet and sour dream


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Post by buttterflies » Sun Apr 25, 2004 12:44 pm

awwwww that is sooo pretty....and sooo sweet!!!! a wonderful expression of love, Ravyn!
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Post by KillerFox81 » Thu Apr 29, 2004 10:50 pm

Great write Ravyn. I've had a few sweet and sour dreams myself and they feel so right but something gnaws at you telling you the exact opposite until you wake. Great pen.
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Post by thief of dreams » Sat Jul 03, 2004 11:31 pm

you have many places to be now Jenn, let those wings carry you to the ones who need you... even if they dont realize it, they will feel and be comforted by your embrace...
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"Thoughts are the shadows of our feelings - always darker, emptier and simpler."
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Post by thief of dreams » Thu Apr 28, 2005 7:47 am

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"Thoughts are the shadows of our feelings - always darker, emptier and simpler."
Friedrich Nietzsche

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