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Posted: Sun Apr 25, 2004 7:22 am
by The Ravyn
Is it late or is it early?
I can't seem to see the clock
through these nicotine glazed eyes
I should just roll over and go back to sleep
but I have lost my lance
and it is hard to joust with
a number 2 eberhard faber

Posted: Sun Apr 25, 2004 12:23 pm
by buttterflies
i'm not sure if i should find the last bit funny...but it kinda made me laugh....? :oops: i'm sorry if i'm screwing up the mood of your poem entirely...but i thought it was great, even more so because of that last bit... :)

Posted: Sun Apr 25, 2004 2:26 pm
by The Ravyn
i suppose that last line is a bit funny if you don't know the reason behind it ... and not many really know that so ... *shrugs* ... interpret any way you like ... that's kinda what 'poetry' is all about isn't it?