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Life Is ...
Posted: Sat Apr 10, 2004 2:22 am
by The Ravyn
on the threshold we gaze
at that which must be
and we call it good
taking the steps
of a child we learn
that which is
in inevitablilty
life
and on the threshold
of another world
we once again grasp
the simplicity of the universe
in all it's complexity
so simple
and yet so evading
love is the key
allow it to unlock
all of the doors
for that is all
that life is
Posted: Sat Apr 10, 2004 9:37 am
by jeannerené
Ravyn....Absolutely wonderful...
jeanne
Posted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 5:20 pm
by debab
ravyn, your poem shines and is truth.... love is ever the key and the answer....beautifully said
Posted: Sun Sep 12, 2004 4:31 pm
by thief of dreams
hehehehe...
Posted: Sun Oct 10, 2004 12:28 pm
by winsome
Ravyn, you are a very talented poet. I like reading your work.
Posted: Sun Oct 17, 2004 6:44 pm
by Reig.the.Lost
Cool peice, and most likely true. Have to find out for myself sometime.
Anyway, I like the semi-reference(at least in my own head) to 'standing on the brink of oblivion'.
Posted: Mon Oct 18, 2004 9:08 pm
by charismaticchristina
I was left speachless with a sense of calm.
Thank you.
Christina
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Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2004 11:23 am
by nrip4life
how true..this world is so complex yet so simplistic..well done!
Posted: Sun Nov 14, 2004 9:48 pm
by Miyu
i miss these poems.
Posted: Tue Jul 19, 2005 5:58 pm
by thief of dreams
Posted: Tue Jul 19, 2005 7:05 pm
by Spazway
This poem is so true. Jenn was such a wise woman, wasn't she?
Posted: Tue Jul 19, 2005 11:37 pm
by thief of dreams
yep yep
Posted: Thu Jul 21, 2005 11:28 am
by OriOnpheOnix
on the threshold we gaze
at that which must be
and we call it good
taking the steps
of a child we learn
that which is
in inevitablilty
life
and on the threshold
of another world
we once again grasp
the simplicity of the universe
in all it's complexity
so simple
and yet so evading
love is the key
allow it to unlock
all of the doors
for that is all
that life is
Posted: Sat Oct 22, 2005 9:12 am
by Tom Watson
How sad, remembering the loss suffered when "The Ravyn" had to fly away...seeing an example of the power of the spirit within her that had undergone such a beating down in the brief life of the wonderful person such as her, is a refreshing reminder of the power and strength within us all and that...
love is the key
allow it to unlock
all of the doors
for that is all
that life is
Thank you Jenn, for leaving a bit of your spirit in your words for us to learn from...
Tom
Posted: Sat Oct 22, 2005 10:26 am
by Cure
Beautiful