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Post by The Ravyn » Thu Mar 04, 2004 9:41 pm

Can there be anything more sweet
Than the taste of you on my lips, my tongue
I close my eyes as I indulge myself
Reveling in your taste, your texture
Breathing becomes more ragged
And I am filled with a great lust
To devour all of you
Leaving nothing left
But I control myself and enjoy you slowly
Building up the tension towards ecstacy
Finally achieving satiation
I sit back and raptly gaze
At the spent and empty package that is you
And I can't help but to wish, wistfully
That Oreos came in larger containers
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Post by heinzs » Thu Mar 04, 2004 11:03 pm

I like mint oreos!

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Post by negatvone » Fri Mar 05, 2004 8:10 am

LOL heinz mint is mine as well
Sweet write Ravyen.... but am I one to pose a compliment. My work still is withought notice. You had the feeling and all my intrests untill the ending comment. Probably just me for I am forlorn in most eyes. In mine own thought the weight of this write was obliterated with the last sequence. Sorry if my opinion offends....... most of my writing does..... other than the "oreo" line I find it prominently moving

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Post by Ven » Fri Mar 05, 2004 10:03 am

lol. Good one :mrgreen:

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Post by bags123 » Fri Mar 05, 2004 10:11 am

There is something very stimulating about Oreo's :mrgreen: Funny stuff!!
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Post by Leysa » Fri Mar 05, 2004 10:32 am

Oreos and milk --- mmmmm!

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Post by KillerFox81 » Sun Mar 07, 2004 3:26 pm

Oreos??? Bleccccccch. Nice write Ravyn!
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Post by JukotoxKanashimi » Sun Mar 07, 2004 4:28 pm

I like the plain oreos with the white cream :mrgreen: Ravyn you just made me hungry hahah nice write.

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