**Wings** Poem of the Week: Feb 1, 2004

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Post by Ven » Fri Jan 30, 2004 7:51 pm

Breathtaking ... beautiful ... stunning. LOVE IT !!!
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Post by Max » Fri Jan 30, 2004 10:56 pm

I never expected to reply to another post but yours is the exception. To read unforced rhyme that makes perfect sense was a pleasure indeed. Most are simply not like that - with the exception of some that Bags wrote. Most resemble cosmetic surgery by Who Flung Dung, infamous Chinese practioner. You deserve the accolades. Expect to hear from me in another 25 years - maybe!

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Post by thief of dreams » Sat Jan 31, 2004 4:09 am

ok no more replies to this poem... 17 replies? sheesh.. she is gonna think we are reading her poems or something.. now we cant have that.. im telling you, if we let her know that we love her poetry then we wont be able to deny her her praise... back off people! lmao.. I KEED I KEED!!
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Post by Ven » Sat Jan 31, 2004 4:24 am

I Love this poem ... I know I've already said that but I just wanted to irritate T.O.D. :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen:
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Post by cglabb » Sat Jan 31, 2004 6:57 pm

Now that is an affirmation of life. Rock solid piece of life and poetry. Much props, Ravyn.
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Post by redrobin » Sun Feb 01, 2004 11:32 am

:bow: :bow:
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Post by Miyu » Sun Feb 01, 2004 12:08 pm

um..is it too late to comment on this?? cause wow..this is amazing...awesome write!!! :bump:

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