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She Spins

Posted: Tue Jan 27, 2004 7:33 pm
by The Ravyn
The dancer spins her minuet
feet seeming to float above the floor
and the menfolk watch lustfully
their faces folded against one another
the dancer spins on unheedingly
her grace and beauty shine
like a diamond seen through
mid-day sunlight
and the men jostle for position
to get a better view
to watch the dancer spin and twist
and, perhaps, to take a turn with her
upon the great dance floor
But the dancer is oblivious to all
her eyes open, but seeing not the throng,
but something deep inside herself
and she feels not the hands of the men
upon her flame scarred flesh
nor the hot cruel kisses
nor the biting, grinding pressures
she is lost in another world
where men do not exist
where there is no such thing as
pain or rape
endlessly she spins

Posted: Tue Jan 27, 2004 8:16 pm
by Miyu
hey ravy, this was an excellent write.. :mrgreen: and i somehow saw a much deeper meaning to this..wow... :book:

miyu

Posted: Wed Jan 28, 2004 3:56 pm
by Broken Wings
yes yes indeed...very good write...i enjoyed reading it...

it did seem to have a deep meaning hidden beneath these phrases...

great job :lol:

Posted: Wed Jan 28, 2004 5:52 pm
by His Barbie Doll
:bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow:

This is awesome Ravyn!!! The coolest!!! I like imagery it possesses... a beautifully crafted piece of crystal is what this piece is!!!

:bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow:

Excellent!!!

Bye bye,
Me... Barbie D...

Posted: Thu Dec 29, 2005 3:48 am
by thief of dreams
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