Light Me

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The Ravyn
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Light Me

Post by The Ravyn » Wed Dec 31, 2003 9:09 pm

stumbling across the alley
as the streetlights play
hide n seek with each other
coughing into a closed fist
as my eyes run their course
down my stained cheeks

corner lamp post leaning
slightly to the left as
the passersby chant in
their unintelligible language
i hold my passport tightly
within stained hands

can i tell you how it feels
to be ever on the outside?
or will you smile your crooked smile
and flag down a cab to take you
to the borders of reality
away from my stained soul

setting filter to lips so
my words come out correctly
i wouldn't want you to get
the wrong impression of
my dishonest intentions or
a glimpse at my stained heart

drag me along behind you
and we play cat and mouse
as the vultures circle above
my wrist shakes again when
looking into your eyes
all i wanted was a light
take my hand if you don't know where you're goin' ... i'll understand .... i've lost the way myself ...
j. kaye

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Post by heinzs » Thu Jan 01, 2004 2:00 pm

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Post by The Ravyn » Sat Jan 03, 2004 1:06 pm

nice shades heinz solo ... hehehehe and thanks for the little bump!
take my hand if you don't know where you're goin' ... i'll understand .... i've lost the way myself ...
j. kaye

whatever you do ... don't click here

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Post by Jess Schue » Sat Jan 03, 2004 3:11 pm

Very nice...made me want to keep reading right until the very end..~always...Slayer* :bump:
-Live simply, so others can simply live-Keller Williams

--Breathe, breathe in the air,
Don't be afraid to care.-- Pink Floyd

Dont wana be anything where i dont know when to stop-Trey Anastasio

<3Oh my lover for the first time in my life
my mind can feel...everything is clear in my heart
everything is clear in our world
i feel life, oh i feel love-John Lennon

Let there be songs, to fill the air-Hunter/Garcia

This Love has got No ceiling-Eddie Vedder

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Post by cglabb » Wed Jan 07, 2004 6:15 am

That's a view of life read too infrequently. Great piece, Ravyn.
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just like everyone else"-Anonymous

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