Vivid butterflies dance divinely.
Delicate wings flashing brightly.
Mesmerizing. Picturesque.
In cloudless summer skies.
Enticing delight.
Fascinating.
Exquisite.
Stunning
me.
The Butterfly Dance (Nonet)
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- midnight_kitty_kat
- Clearwater Poet
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The Butterfly Dance (Nonet)
“I am thrilled to be alive at time when humanity is pushing against the limits of understanding. Even better, we may eventually discover that there are no limits.”
― Richard Dawkins
― Richard Dawkins
- heinzs
- The Fat Cat
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Re: The Butterfly Dance (Nonet)
How do you like its looks in this format:
Vivid butterflies dance divinely.
Delicate wings flashing brightly.
Mesmerizing. Picturesque.
In cloudless summer skies.
Enticing delight.
Fascinating.
Exquisite.
Stunning
me.
Delicate wings flashing brightly.
Mesmerizing. Picturesque.
In cloudless summer skies.
Enticing delight.
Fascinating.
Exquisite.
Stunning
me.
An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed Be.
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- midnight_kitty_kat
- Clearwater Poet
- Posts: 60
- Joined: Thu Jul 17, 2003 12:01 am
- Tag line: Scientia Potentia Est
- Location: Nebraska
Re: The Butterfly Dance (Nonet)
I LOVE it! Wow, that is visually striking, and almost changes the way it makes me feel. When aligned to the left it seems like more of a whimsical piece, but this way I think it captures me as a reader much more. Thank you for the suggestion.
“I am thrilled to be alive at time when humanity is pushing against the limits of understanding. Even better, we may eventually discover that there are no limits.”
― Richard Dawkins
― Richard Dawkins
- heinzs
- The Fat Cat
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- Joined: Tue Dec 18, 2001 12:01 am
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Re: The Butterfly Dance (Nonet)
Glad you like it. Many poems appear quite different when centered.
An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed Be.
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