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poeticpiers reborn
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My privilege.

Post by poeticpiers reborn » Fri Nov 18, 2011 1:21 pm

My privilege.

Short rondeau.

Brushing her hair by candle light.
My lady accords to me the right.
To see her with her hair let down
Clad only in a silken gown.
Brushing her hair.

We have been wed for forty year.
There’s strands of silver in her hair.
I do not find that hard to bear.
I love to see her I declare
Brushing her hair.

Friday, 18 November 2011
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Re: My privilege.

Post by heinzs » Fri Nov 18, 2011 1:55 pm

40 years for me as well... :cool:
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