Betrayed
Sonnetina quatro
I act independently
Point blank refuse to be a clone
You can accept or reject me
I am prepared to stand alone.
It’s my responsibility
to show I manage on my own
My past experience has taught me
I can’t depend on anyone
A lesson I learnt painfully
When I awoke to find you’d gone..
Monday, 10 October 2011
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Betrayed!
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Re: Betrayed!
This one struck fast,...right between the eyes. Well done Ivor.
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