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Twaddle
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I would

Post by Twaddle » Thu Jan 29, 2009 10:12 am

I hope this comes out the way it's supposed to...
Just for fun!

I Would

I would,
could I for one night,
sate this immortal longing.
Save me from this knotty pining,
if only for this day. Warm my sap and free
me from dormancy. My bark has grown thick
and tough from many cold seasons, my limbs
desire the flow of sap in their extremities, ready
for leaving, unfortunately there is no new
green, yet and I remain firmly
rooted; But
maybe
this is
the year
that I
will grow
some nuts.


Timothy P. Twaddle, 2008
One loses interest
in that
which bears no mystery,
And holds no promise...

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Re: I would

Post by heinzs » Thu Jan 29, 2009 6:35 pm

:thumbsup: :mrgreen:
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Re: I would

Post by poeticpiers » Sat Jan 31, 2009 2:33 pm

Awise and worthy ambition Frutless trees must fear the axe
good example of concrete poetrt
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