**Temple in the Heat**

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AlluraD
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**Temple in the Heat**

Post by AlluraD » Mon Jan 16, 2006 7:41 am

The meadow grasses beckoned,
adorned with raucous flowers,
a tranquil spot inviting us to stay.
So arm in arm we reckoned
to wile away the hours
and down upon the fragrant blanket lay.

Our dreams aligned together
just like shoulder, hip and thighs,
communion's holy urging in the light.
We'd stay this way forever,
as the wind through morning sighs-
how breathlessly we drank in every sight.

These passing hours remaining
in our hearts as daylight slips
the bonds that bind the lark's song to the day.
Night's grandeur entertaining
as again you find my lips;
the morning's petals strewn in disarray.

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Admin note:
Nominated for Poem of the Week on 5/26/06
for the week of 5/28
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Debbie
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Allura

Post by Debbie » Mon Jan 16, 2006 8:28 am

Allura..this is so amazing I was just saying last night I missed you in the Pages and pushed one of your poems up and here you are today..an answer to prayer..I'm so happy..

This is a beautiful picturesque poem beautiful like you are inside out..
thank you for posting once again..

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Re: Allura

Post by Shane » Mon Jan 16, 2006 6:42 pm

Debbie wrote:Allura..this is so amazing I was just saying last night I missed you in the Pages and pushed one of your poems up and here you are today..an answer to prayer..I'm so happy..

This is a beautiful picturesque poem beautiful like you are inside out..
thank you for posting once again..

:hugs:


ditto :hello:

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Post by AlluraD » Mon Apr 17, 2006 9:45 am

Thank you Debbie~ *hug* You are a sweet and generous lady~
Thank you for thinking of me~ I am glad you liked this one~

Shane~
Thank you~
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Post by richie » Tue Apr 18, 2006 11:00 am

very fine indeed

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Post by AlluraD » Thu May 25, 2006 10:34 am

richie~
*smiling* Am very glad you liked this one...thank you for saying so~

Evia~
For some reason I love this poem more than very many of mine...I think it's the musical meter......I am very happy you liked this one my friend.....thank you for your post~
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