The Perfection That Is Us (an acrostic)

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GoddessErika
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The Perfection That Is Us (an acrostic)

Post by GoddessErika » Tue Nov 08, 2005 4:16 pm

Surreal
Enrapture
Vicarious
Elation
Never-ending
Tryst
Eternal
Euphoria
Newfound

Yearning
Evolves
Again
Rejuvenating
Serendipity

Intimate
Nirvana

Transcends
Heightened
Euphoria

Mysterious
Affinity
Kindled
Intensely
Numinous
Grandeur


*still messing with this one, but I'll let you know when it's final!*
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Post by Eternum 1 » Tue Nov 08, 2005 5:17 pm

Hope I don't have to wait 17 years for the finale. Lot of adjectives here Erika, maybe it needs some active verbs to complete.

But then what do I know? Haven't been actively verbed in awhile myself :mrgreen:

Looking forward to the completed version in the acrostic style in which you excel.

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Post by Friend_forever » Mon Nov 28, 2005 10:46 am

Yep... the other one is perfect... although this one is nice too... :mrgreen:
And as I watch you in this light
I never realized your eyes were full of
So many colors.
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Post by GoddessErika » Wed Nov 30, 2005 10:27 pm

ah... I pretty much tossed this one out to replace it with part II, but thanks for reading anyhow! I think the other is much better though...
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Post by Debbie » Sat Dec 10, 2005 11:37 am

well done Erika... :hello: haven't seen much of you lately..I pray we do... :thumbsup:
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Post by GoddessErika » Sun Dec 18, 2005 10:35 pm

I'm here in the background at least twice a week, I just don't always let you all know that. :grin:
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Post by thief of dreams » Sun Dec 18, 2005 11:39 pm

why you sneaky little... i'm telling on you!
"Thoughts are the shadows of our feelings - always darker, emptier and simpler."
Friedrich Nietzsche

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