Storm (A Sijo)

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Shane
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Storm (A Sijo)

Post by Shane » Sat Oct 15, 2005 7:18 pm

Loud thunder crashing
through the pouring rain
Lightning has just begun
to light the way
But then I sit with you
and you flame my soft
marshmellow in the storm
of your desire




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Debbie
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Post by Debbie » Sat Oct 15, 2005 7:27 pm

Shane this is so awesome..I really like this one alot...
the more your write the better you get..keep :computer: ..so I can read more ok :wink:
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Reach Out And Love Someone
Slow Down And Look around
You Will Find Someone Who Needs You.....
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Post by Shane » Sat Oct 15, 2005 8:38 pm

Thanks Debbie :mrgreen:

I sure will...

Watch my dust :wink:




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Post by heinzs » Sat Oct 15, 2005 10:37 pm

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An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed Be.
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Post by Shane » Sat Oct 15, 2005 11:11 pm

Thanks Heinz :mrgreen:



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