Brave Man ( A Triolet)

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Shane
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Brave Man ( A Triolet)

Post by Shane » Wed Oct 12, 2005 5:22 pm

O! that I could be a brave man
A pall of stoutheartedness feigns
Faint praise alludes every dark plan
O! that I could be a brave man
A page of saddened old time span
Nothing more than remembered pains
O! that I could be a brave man
A pall of stoutheartedness feigns




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Richard taylor

Post by Richard taylor » Sat Oct 15, 2005 1:37 am

very good Triolet
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Post by Shane » Sat Oct 15, 2005 3:41 am

Thanks Richard :mrgreen:




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Post by Debbie » Fri Oct 28, 2005 6:41 am

:bump: this is a good one Shane.. :hello:
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Reach Out And Love Someone
Slow Down And Look around
You Will Find Someone Who Needs You.....
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Post by negatvone » Fri Oct 28, 2005 8:26 am

Perfect meter. :cool:
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Re: shane

Post by Shane » Fri Oct 28, 2005 7:35 pm

Debbie wrote::bump: this is a good one Shane.. :hello:


Thanks Debbie :grin:



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Post by Shane » Fri Oct 28, 2005 7:37 pm

negatvone wrote:Perfect meter. :cool:

Thanks Nega :grin:



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